Monday, September 17, 2012

I Saw God, Draft 3 Now

I Saw God in the Elevator

I saw God in the elevator--
he looked like Morgan Freeman.
He wore an orange jumpsuit,
destination: cell block three.

I wondered what he was doing there,
and then I thought, of course.
He's headed for the top floor,
rising toward redemption.


I've changed the last line several times now, but I think now, in version 3, I've got what I was trying to say.
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